My Outdoor Adventures Poem

This morning for poetry we made a poem based on my other poem a little bit down. We chose 10 sentences that we liked and wrote it down. Then we described how we felt when we were doing that and then we put it into smaller words and now its a poem. It makes no sense at some bits but yea. I enjoyed describing it and I found it hard to put the words into smaller more descriptive words. I could have been BTB (Better Than Before) by changing the descriptive bits but anyway hope you like it. Oh and also we had to add I am in front of everything so yea that makes it make no sense k byyeeeee.

I am my family having fun, It's great to see them happy.
I am "It's not my fault I'm so beautiful", Shows my unhumbleness.
I am playing king of the mountain, So fun yet so scary.
I am swimming in the harbor, Nice, refreshing water.
I am Great Grandad is really nice, I want to spend lots of time with him.
I am driving on the beach. It's nice to take the wheel.
I am fishing off the wharf, I love the feel of bites on my rod.
I am diving for Kina and being brave, It's so pretty underwater.
I am playing with my friends, They are nice and cool.
I am biking everywhere. I like the wind blowing my hair.

My "Trip Up North" Poem

This morning we had to do poetry and we got to choose a subject and then write a 40 sentence poem about it!! It was really challenging to find words to rhyme so some bits probably don't make much sense but it doesn't matter. My subject is about when I go Up North around Kaitaia and all my family and friends get together and we have lots of fun. We had to do 20 lines and 2 sentences in each but I got to do 15 lines because I was taking to long. Each sentence has a really big story behind it and each one means heaps to me. I enjoyed bringing back some great memories and I probably could have been better by taking a little bit longer to get better words. We also had to add the word My in front of everything so yeah.

 

My socializing. My sitting and crying.

My drinking smoothies. My watching movies.

My swimming in the Harbour. My skin feeling like lava.

My catching the biggest wave. My diving for kina and being brave.

My driving on the beach. My getting spoiled with treats.

My eating lots of food. My "How very rude!!"

My going to the park. My flounder hunting in the dark.

My biking everywhere. My family lives so near.

My "It's not my fault I'm so beautiful." My jumping off the waterfall.

My Jet-Skiing in the ocean. My doing bike jumps in slow motion.

My family having so much fun. My trying to get the motorbike to run.

My playing king of the mountain. My swimming in the fountain.

My playing with my friends. My driving fast around all the bends.

My great Grandad is really nice. My "I hope I don't get lice."

My fishing off the wharf. My amazing trip Up North