Comic writing

This is my plan for my comic. Sadly I did not finish.

My holiday

During my holiday I went up to Glorivalle with Kimberly, Alyssa, Brialey, Steven, and Ellagrea. When we arrived it was a lot different than we'd expected. We saw Mr. Sinton-white, his wife, and his daughter. When we finally started to go in the waiters showed us where our seats were and there was food in front of us. The show started and I fell asleep for some of it. I asked Mum if we'd get any more food since I'd eaten it all and she said there was a full course. In the intermission, my brother Tane leaned over to talk to Mum but he slipped and his tongue knocked on the table. It started to bleed so Mum brought him to the desk. The show started again and I think the food was better in the second half. There was delicious tomato soup, a really nice dinner and ice cream with chocolate and whipped cream. Once the concert was done we went outside and Stella, Tane, Asha, Charlie, Walter and Me played on the playground. Soon once the adults were done talking we left. It was really amazing.