Wednesday, 12 September 2018

The Alien Invasion

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4 comments:

  1. Tulsi26 September 2018 at 09:29

    Hi Bella
    This is an amazing piece of work.
    I liked how you made it sound super interesting.
    For something to think about you could add full stops at the end of your sentences.
    From Tulsi

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  2. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:29

    I like...the part when you introduce yourself as the director.

    Next time… you could add some more action.

    I wonder...why did you choose aliens for your animation. From Timo.

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  3. Bella12 November 2018 at 11:38

    Hi Timo, I chose the aliens because well it was just the first thing that came to mind and I do like aliens even though I am a girl.
    From Bella

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  4. Anonymous12 November 2018 at 11:50

    Hi Bella. I like how you introduced what jobs you had at the start. Next time I think you should make it longer and on the second page you should double it. Why did you chose that name?

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