Friday 7 September 2018

You've got the power poem

Hey you over there
With the really wooly hair
Why are you bullying
That boy over there
It's not nice
It's not cool
So why do you plan on calling him a fool?
I know your hiding something
And it might be bad
But that is no excuse to bully
And make him sad.

By Bella Masters






2 comments:

  1. Tena koe it's Jacob I really like your poem it is really nice and a good way to stop bullying. Why did you do this poem. Maybe next time u could use commas so people can pause when the read and take a breath.

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  2. Kia ora Jacob,
    It's Bella, I did this poem half for the joy of writing a poem and half for the You've Got The Power Show. Thanks for the tip and I'll try to do it next time.
    Yours Sincerely Bella

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