For the past few weeks, we have been writing narratives. We had to do a short draft that didn't have much detail and then the long draft which is the one above. I enjoyed choosing the design on the slides and I found it challenging to write because my hand hurt really bad. I could have been BTB (Better Than Before) by showing not telling which means that you describe the place instead of saying something boring. You don't have to read all of it because that would take ages but you can and I hope you like it.
Haere Ra.
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